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Can Liz Truss tell a story? Her lack of polish could be her greatest selling point

No public-school bullshit Credit: Leon Neal/Getty

No public-school bullshit Credit: Leon Neal/Getty


September 8, 2022   4 mins

The most arresting opening to a wedding speech I have come across started thus: “Being asked to give the Best Man’s speech is a bit like being asked to have sex with the Queen Mother.” The audience gasped, clearly a little embarrassed. He then come to the point: “It’s a great honour but nobody really wants to do it.” Jerry Seinfeld also has a good line on public speaking. “Speaking in front of a crowd is considered the number one fear of the average person. I found that amazing. Number two was death. This means that to an average person, if you have to be at a funeral, you would rather to be in the casket than doing the eulogy.”

Our new Prime Minister would seem to be in this camp. She is awkward behind the lectern, nervous of public speaking and wooden in her delivery. She seems untrustworthy. Oh the irony. Boris Johnson was the least trustworthy Prime Minister in living memory, but he papered over his character flaws with rhetorical bluster. And that made him feel “relatable”.

Even his faults and his vanity were requisitioned to the cause. Better a cad that you know than a saint that you don’t.

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Truss at the lectern simply doesn’t perform. There is no polish or flamboyant public-school bullshit. She doesn’t let you in with self-deprecating humour. But could we come to see this as a mark of authenticity? She is reassuringly dull: dull in a not-Boris kind of way. In a way that might elicit an increasing sympathy and identification for her comprehensive straightforwardness. More like Seinfeld’s “average person”. She might be poor in front of camera, but perhaps she will be far better behind the scenes.

Boris’ last speech as PM was full of his usual tricks. Lots of looking around and eye contact, pointing towards people, responding to their noise, making them feel he was talking directly to them. Lots of expansive hand gestures, body movement, voice modulation, banging the podium, fist clenching. He looked down at his text, but he looked up much more. He was fully present to others; at least, that was the impression. And even when saying goodbye, it felt like he was enjoying himself with words.

By contrast, Truss was rigid. She didn’t extemporise and she stuck to the script. She talked straight to the camera. Occasionally, she remembered that she had been told to smile — so did so mid-sentence, a grin that seemed unconnected to the words she was reading out. There were no pauses or modulations of the voice. It was boring.

She was much better at PMQ’s. Perhaps because she didn’t have too much time to think about it. Like many people who would rather be in the coffin than giving the eulogy, I suspect she over rehearses set piece speeches.

This is a common mistake. What does a person who fears public speaking actually fear? Often, the nightmare is standing in front of a crowd with nothing to say. They are all there looking at you, and words — the words don’t come. To protect themselves against this, people over-prepare. As a vicar, who has organised hundreds of funerals, this much I know: if someone says they will speak for five minutes, they will do 10. Written-down words are a comfort blanket.

At least twice a week for over 20 years, I have spoken in public, mostly sermons. Many of the great public orators have something of the preacher about them – Martin Luther King Jr was a preacher, Obama could have been one, Thatcher, who had to work on it, was the daughter of one. Political speeches are often secular versions of pulpit prose.

My first sermon was a disaster. I was used to speaking from a script during Oxford tutorials. And when I got up into the pulpit for the first time, six foot above contradiction, I basically read out my weekly essay. And I could see the congregation glazing over. During the following week, my boss gave me a terrifying instruction: no text next week. And so, for 20 years, I have ad-libbed every Sunday. No notes.

This much I have learnt. Find the one thing you want to say, then tell it as a story. Yes, it may go off in various directions, but always return to the point. Take a basic idea and turn it into a narrative. Know your beginning and your end. And look at the people you are talking to. Focus on the ones who are nodding and smiling – they give you energy.

Also, nerves are your friend. No one speaks well without nerves, they keep you focused. But don’t allow the nervousness to become what you keep on thinking about. Prepare with a laser like focus on what you want to say. Boil it down, boil it down. Then relax and explain it.

Preach “with the newspaper in one hand and the Bible in the other”, said the great theologian Karl Barth. To translate into secular terms: have a strong sense of what is important to you, and make it bounce off the headlines, interact with present reality. For all his rhetorical polish, it wasn’t at all clear what Boris really believed in. After a while, it became obvious his fireworks were a kind of misdirection. I still don’t really know what he believed in other than himself.

You don’t get any of that Cincinnatus nonsense with Truss. There can be no better way of exorcising the toxic Johnson era than with some straightforward, albeit clumpy delivery. I wonder whether in the end we will come to see Truss as a woman without guile.

Politics is, after all, the art of out-narrating your opponent, telling better stories. We will have to see whether Truss’s style can achieve this. Perhaps she will be able to position herself as Seinfeld’s “average person”. People could well come to identify with her lack of polish. Electorally, it may be a surprisingly good look, she’s boring but she means business. After all, the only person she has to out-narrate is Keir Starmer – perhaps the only person on the House of Commons who could tell a political story worse than her.


Giles Fraser is a journalist, broadcaster and Vicar of St Anne’s, Kew.

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David Simpson
David Simpson
1 year ago

I thought she was excellent in her first PMQ yesterday. Calm, clear, straightforward – repeating her message while answering the questions put. And she hardly raised her voice. She may be wrong but she certainly left me feeling more confident about our future than all the cavilling opeds about her over the ast few weeks.

Katharine Eyre
Katharine Eyre
1 year ago
Reply to  David Simpson

I’m taking a stand-back-and-watch approach to Liz Truss. I have not been keen thus far, but I was impressed at how unflappable she was when Rishi kept interrupting her in the 2nd (?) debate. That would have wound me up no end but she really conducted herself well.

Last edited 1 year ago by Katharine Eyre
Tony Conrad
Tony Conrad
1 year ago
Reply to  Katharine Eyre

Liz knows the biz hopefully.

Nicky Samengo-Turner
Nicky Samengo-Turner
1 year ago
Reply to  David Simpson

Hear, hear!

James Kirk
James Kirk
1 year ago

A long time ago but Mrs Thatcher in her 1979 + days was a pretty awful orator. With elocution lessons and polishing she became a force to be reckoned with. All we need now is Starmer to fall over on a beach. He’s half way there with the him and Ange kneeling photo.

Tony Conrad
Tony Conrad
1 year ago
Reply to  James Kirk

Who would you pick for Prime Minister? One who knows what a woman is and one who doesn’t?

Nicky Samengo-Turner
Nicky Samengo-Turner
1 year ago

I humbly take back my sarcastic, cynical and satirical comments on Truss… So far so good, both in PMQ and cabinet appointments… and the ‘ little things” like no 10 order of dress…

Steve Murray
Steve Murray
1 year ago

Giles would appreciate the ‘repentant sinner’ gesture!
There’s been so much hot air, energy and road miles unnecessarily expended during this interminable period of the leadership contest, i’m surprised the poor woman still has her voice intact. And to convince whom? The Tory membership.
Anyone making predictions about how good or not she might be as a PM is a political fool. Her delivery of set speeches may improve, but will anyone really be bothered if they don’t come election time if she has navigated a pathway through our current problems?

Tony Conrad
Tony Conrad
1 year ago

She looks so vulnerable in the picture waiting for the mass critism to arrive. My heart goes out to her. I hope she does well and that she can count on good friends and family. I think she will need them.

Richard Irons
Richard Irons
1 year ago
Reply to  Tony Conrad

Yes, indeed. Reminds me of the well known quote, “If a politician wants a friend they should buy a dog”.

Last edited 1 year ago by Richard Irons